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One day there was the god of the galaxy. The god of the galaxy had a newborn baby wolf name Raven. But suddenly the god of the galaxy had a massive war, so that they need Raven to be safe.They send Raven to a planet name earth. The god of the galaxy put Raven in a crib and flew it to the river. Then an alpha wolf found Raven and tell it to his wife.

          They saw a weird and a mystirious necklace and that mystirous necklace glows and gave a warning that said “ if you’re an alpha wolf don’t let her be an alpha”. They were confused but then they still kept Raven as their own child. One week later the alpha’s wife was pregnant and Raven was three years old. Then nine months later a newborn baby wolf was finally born named Alice. Raven was very excited with her new sister Alice.

Raven and Alice were a happy child but when Raven was twelve years old she got bullied because of her fur colour. In the artic everyone fur colour was bright such as white, bright yellow, and much more. But Raven was the only wolf who’s fur colour was black, entirely black. Raven family fur colour was white especially Alice. Raven doesn’t care about that because when her sixteen birthday came Raven was going to be a alpha of artic.

When her sixteen birthday came she directly ask her father is she was going to be the alpha of artic. But her father refused her. Raven was not going to be an alpha but her sister Alice was going to be the alpha. Raven was suprised and she complained to her father because she was older than her sister Alice. But her father didn’t answer her question.

Raven ran away to her den. In her den Raven was really mad and sad at the same time. Then she begin thinking if she could runaway. She brought her necklace and a food supply. When she ran away she have no idea where to go. She was really scared because she was alone. She thought she was going to die but luckly she found a small village of wolf.

She was really reliefed that she wasn’t dead yet. But suddenly she came across some evil bandits. They was going to attack her and steal her precious necklace. Raven was really scared and she doesn’t know what to do. When one of the bandit scratch her on her face she was really mad. Raven fight them back but she didn’t notice that actually she fight her paw but she fight with a mysterious power.

She realized that she fight them with an earth power. When she smashed the ground suddenly a big rock came out from the ground. The bandits ran away from her. Then she started to walk again with a confusement. She passed to a weird looking cave. She go inside the cave but suddenly someone stopped her from going inside the cave.

It was a holy wolf that was sended by all gods to the earth. When the holy wolf saw her he directly bow to her. Raven was really confused and suprised. She asked to him that she was an alpha wolf. The holy wolf laughed at her.

Then the holy wolf explained if he knows that she was not the alpha wolf but Raven was the daughter of the god of galaxy. Raven was really suprised until she wanted faint but she didn’t. The holy wolf ask her to go into the cave. Raven go inside the cave with him and she found a pond. It was not just a regular pond.

 The water in the was glowing bright blue. The holy wolf ask her to the drink the water from the pond. When she drinked the water. She begin to remember the past when she was still a baby and a large wing came out from her. Raven finally know why she can’t the alpha wolf because was the next generation of the god of galaxy.

But suddenly using her hearing power she heard her family was in dangered. Raven thanks to the holy wolf and directly flew with her large wings. When flew with her large the speed was not like a bird but like a lightning. She came to her home at the right time because the enemy was going to attack her father but when she lands she made the alpha of the enemies pushed away hardly. She warn them to stay away from her family or else worse. So she aked her family and other to stay inside.

Then she and her enemy fight. Raven used her incredible power and she won. Everyone was happy and cheer her.

TBC.

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