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          Once upon a time live 3 bestfriend  in a city jakarta. They’r name are Jack, Bob, and Dandi. This 3 people always go on vacation togather. They live far from each other. They’r hobbies are hiking. They've climbe mountains. One of the mountian they’ve hike is everest mountain. Everest is the tallest mountain they’ve climbe. One day jack hike mountain without Bob and Dandi.He go hikking with the hikking community on the mountain he’s hikking at. Bob ask Dandi if he see Jack but Dandi don’t know . Bob and Dandi ask his parents ‘where is jack’ they answer ‘he’s hikking…… don’t you guys know about it?’ ‘No we don’t know about it’ and then they leave jack’s house. Bob and Dandi is mad about it. The next 3 days Jack come’s home. Jack’s parrents inform Bob and Dandi if Jack was home. Bob and Dandi ask Jack to meet up at a café. At the café Bob and Dandi ask Jack why do he went hikking without us. Jack answer “I just want to feel what it feel’s like hikking without bestfriensit was so boring beacouse no one makes joke, no one to talk with, and no one can have fun with”.After Bob and Dandi  hears that strory they forgive Jack about it.

 

         Next 2 week they plan to hang out to watch movie. Jack  plan to hike again but now with his bestfriend. Jack tell them about it but  Bob and  Dandi cant because they have to go to work. So Jack cancelled the plan about hikking . The next few days jack have no time to hang out with Bob and Dandi because Dandi and Bob have a lot of work to do. When Jack hear about it he feel sad because no one make jokes and he feels lonely. Jack tried to find friend that like to hikes but its hard to find the friend that he have before. Even though Jack, Bob, and Dandi cannot hang out togather again ut they’r still a good bestfriend. Jack still hike mountains because its his hobby even though he have a job but he still can do his hobby.  

 

           One day Bob and Dandi try to hike again after they don’t hike for along  time. Bob and Dandi feel so tired after the hikking. Jake want to meet up with them again but they cant and Jake ask them “why we cant meet up?” Bob answer “me  and Dandi feel so tired after we try to jike again after along time”. Jake ask them to often do sports so they will be strong again to hike togather and not to work all the time. Jake ask them if they want to joinn him on hikking at august to hike everest mountain again. Bob and Dandi agree about it and they do sport so they’r strong enough to hike the tallest mountain again. Jake, Bob and Dandi exercise togather every weekend for the everest hikking. The next 3 month is august so they’r flying to nepal to hike. They hike with the community ofer there so they will not lost. The next day they start to hike.. They stay about 1 day in that check point because a storm pass by. After the storm pass by they start to hike to the check point before they hike to the tip top. In the last check point they must bring 2 oxygen tube . Then they start hikking. In the middle of the advanture Dandi ran out of oxygen tube so he ask the community if some one bring extra oxygen tube,but no ne bring extra. He feel dizzy . He feel more dizzy and he ask to Bob “why im so dizzy” bob answer”oh no Dandi your runnning out of oxygen “. Suddenly Dandi fell over and don’t move Bob , Jack and the community shock when they see Dandi fell over suddenly,so Bob and Jack direclty go to Dandi and see if he still breathing.  They feel shock when they don’t feel the heart beat and the breath of Dandi, they’r so sad to hear about it . Bob pick up Dandi and the leader ask to put is back down or you will die togather with him. Bob follow what did the leader says. They keep hikking and suddenly they see a steep clift, the steep clift have rope on the rock to hold on,but when its Bob’s turn the rope ripped and Bob almost fall down…………..then the rock that he stepped on fall down and that rock bring Bob down too. This position Jack’s felling was down because he just lost 2 of his friend. He hike back down and feel so angry that suddenly he fall into a steep clift.

 

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