Loading...
Logo TinLit
Read Story - THE SAD ADVANTURE
MENU
About Us  

                                                                                                                                 THE  SAD ADVANTURE

 

          Once upon a time live 3 bestfriend  in a city jakarta. They’r name are Jack, Bob, and Dandi. This 3 people always go on vacation togather. They live far from each other. They’r hobbies are hiking. They've climbe mountains. One of the mountian they’ve hike is everest mountain. Everest is the tallest mountain they’ve climbe. One day jack hike mountain without Bob and Dandi.He go hikking with the hikking community on the mountain he’s hikking at. Bob ask Dandi if he see Jack but Dandi don’t know . Bob and Dandi ask his parents ‘where is jack’ they answer ‘he’s hikking…… don’t you guys know about it?’ ‘No we don’t know about it’ and then they leave jack’s house. Bob and Dandi is mad about it. The next 3 days Jack come’s home. Jack’s parrents inform Bob and Dandi if Jack was home. Bob and Dandi ask Jack to meet up at a café. At the café Bob and Dandi ask Jack why do he went hikking without us. Jack answer “I just want to feel what it feel’s like hikking without bestfriensit was so boring beacouse no one makes joke, no one to talk with, and no one can have fun with”.After Bob and Dandi  hears that strory they forgive Jack about it.

 

         Next 2 week they plan to hang out to watch movie. Jack  plan to hike again but now with his bestfriend. Jack tell them about it but  Bob and  Dandi cant because they have to go to work. So Jack cancelled the plan about hikking . The next few days jack have no time to hang out with Bob and Dandi because Dandi and Bob have a lot of work to do. When Jack hear about it he feel sad because no one make jokes and he feels lonely. Jack tried to find friend that like to hikes but its hard to find the friend that he have before. Even though Jack, Bob, and Dandi cannot hang out togather again ut they’r still a good bestfriend. Jack still hike mountains because its his hobby even though he have a job but he still can do his hobby.  

 

           One day Bob and Dandi try to hike again after they don’t hike for along  time. Bob and Dandi feel so tired after the hikking. Jake want to meet up with them again but they cant and Jake ask them “why we cant meet up?” Bob answer “me  and Dandi feel so tired after we try to jike again after along time”. Jake ask them to often do sports so they will be strong again to hike togather and not to work all the time. Jake ask them if they want to joinn him on hikking at august to hike everest mountain again. Bob and Dandi agree about it and they do sport so they’r strong enough to hike the tallest mountain again. Jake, Bob and Dandi exercise togather every weekend for the everest hikking. The next 3 month is august so they’r flying to nepal to hike. They hike with the community ofer there so they will not lost. The next day they start to hike.. They stay about 1 day in that check point because a storm pass by. After the storm pass by they start to hike to the check point before they hike to the tip top. In the last check point they must bring 2 oxygen tube . Then they start hikking. In the middle of the advanture Dandi ran out of oxygen tube so he ask the community if some one bring extra oxygen tube,but no ne bring extra. He feel dizzy . He feel more dizzy and he ask to Bob “why im so dizzy” bob answer”oh no Dandi your runnning out of oxygen “. Suddenly Dandi fell over and don’t move Bob , Jack and the community shock when they see Dandi fell over suddenly,so Bob and Jack direclty go to Dandi and see if he still breathing.  They feel shock when they don’t feel the heart beat and the breath of Dandi, they’r so sad to hear about it . Bob pick up Dandi and the leader ask to put is back down or you will die togather with him. Bob follow what did the leader says. They keep hikking and suddenly they see a steep clift, the steep clift have rope on the rock to hold on,but when its Bob’s turn the rope ripped and Bob almost fall down…………..then the rock that he stepped on fall down and that rock bring Bob down too. This position Jack’s felling was down because he just lost 2 of his friend. He hike back down and feel so angry that suddenly he fall into a steep clift.

 

How do you feel about this chapter?

0 0 0 0 0 0
Submit A Comment
Comments (0)

    No comment.

Similar Tags
SORRY
25989      5427     11     
Romance
Masa SMA adalah masa yang harus dipergunakan Aluna agar waktunya tidak terbuang sia-sia. Dan mempunyai 3 (tiga) sahabat cowok yang super duper ganteng, baik, humoris nyatanya belum untuk terbilang cukup aman. Buktinya dia malah baper sama Kale, salah satu cowok di antara mereka. Hatinya tidak benar-benar aman. Sayangnya, Kale itu lagi bucin-bucinnya sama cewek yang bernama Venya, musuh bebuyutan...
The Last Mask
542      367     3     
Short Story
mimpi itu seperti nyata. gadis itu selalu berusaha bersembunyi. namun waktu membawanya pada hal yang sama seperti perempuan-perempuan di keluarganya
Gomawo
2750      1192     10     
Fan Fiction
Dia, datang. Dia, merubah. Dia, dunia. Hidup seorang Park Jihoon berubah 180 derajat setelah bertemu dengannya. Seorang yeoja bernama Yi Rang yang telah merubah dunianya. Yang membuatnya bahagia sekaligus berdebar menunggu kedatangannya. Yang membuatnya mampu untuk berani menggenggam tangan yeoja tersebut dengan penuh ketulusan.
Till Death Due Us Part
689      427     1     
Short Story
I hold your hand Reminisce of our time together The walks on the park The beautiful sunset that we would watch together But now I watch it alone
I'm Not You You're Not Me
2357      1081     2     
Romance
Ini adalah kisah tentang si kembar Arkan dan Arsen, semua selalu bilang kisah mereka pasti sempurna dengan wajah yang bisa dibilang sangat tampan dengan harta orang tua mereka yang kaya pastinya kisah mereka semua sempurna. Tapi nyatanya kisah mereka tak sesempurna itu, karna orang tua mereka yang bercerai membuat mereka saling membenci. Ini kisah Arkana Nico Cannavaro dengan segala kasih sayang ...
Concern
999      613     1     
Short Story
A friend gives another friend some advice.
Makna yang Terpendam
614      447     0     
Short Story
Inilah cara Allah mendewasakanku, via makna yang terpendam dalam skenario-Nya
I love you & I lost you
9103      3723     4     
Romance
Kehidupan Arina berubah 180 derajat bukan hanya karena bisnis ayahnya yang hancur, keluarganya pun ikut hancur. orang tuanya bercerai dan Arina hanya tinggal bersama adiknya di rumah, ayahnya yang harus dirawat karena mengalami depresi berat. Di tengah hancurnya keluarganya, Arina bertemu kembali dengan teman kecilnya, Arkan. Bertemunya kembali mereka membuka sebuah lembaran asmara, namun apa...
My Big Bos : Mr. Han Joe
679      427     2     
Romance
Siapa sih yang tidak mau memiliki seorang Bos tampan? Apalagi jika wajahnya mirip artis Korea. Itu pula yang dirasakan Fraya ketika diterima di sebuah perusahaan franchise masakan Korea. Dia begitu antusias ingin segera bekerja di perusahaan itu. Membayangkannya saja sudah membuat pipi Fraya memerah. Namun, apa yang terjadi berbeda jauh dengan bayangannya selama ini. Bekerja dengan Mr. Ha...
Peneduh dan Penghujan
417      353     1     
Short Story
Bagaimana hujan memotivasi dusta