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BLACK HEARTED PRINCE AND HIS CYBORGS

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My Reason

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LANGIT

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Kala Senja

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The Red String of Fate
Review By DeeDee

Interesting read!

I loved how the writing style and the language used by the author makes me feel like I am travelling inside the story. I also enjoy how the characters are illustrated. Each character in this story is granted traits that are easily distinguishable from other characters. I would say though, that partly because of that, the story lacks in character complexity. But that doesn't really bother me seeing that it's a short story, and thus it's challenging to go in depth with each character.

There are several grammatical mistakes, but fortunately they're all minor. The storyline is also very promising and has great potential, but there are several elements I didn't really favor. The beginning part really captured me, yet I am not a big fan of the romantic ending. I think romance is truly unecessary and doesn't bring much justification to the ending, which I think is the only flaw in the plot. Fortunately, the moral message conveys, which is ultimately what's important.

In overall, this was a terrific read and I would definitely recommend it and would love to read more from this author.

Ibuku Malaikatku
Review By Miaa01

Ceritanya sangat menyentuh dan sungguh merefleksikan cinta seorang ibu terhadap anaknya. Gaya penulisan ringan dan mudah dimengerti. Plot dan moral cerita juga mudah ditangkap. Watak tokoh dalam cerita ini sangat sederhana, cocok dengan alur. Secara keseluruhan, karya yang bagus sekali!

Jangan Panggil Saya 'Haji'
Review By Made sy

Cerita yang menarik dan menggelitik.

Tema cerita yang diangkat sangat orisinil, menyoroti kehidupan masyarakat dewasa ini. Cerita memuat kritik sosial namun dengan gaya penulisan yang baik, penulis mampu menyuguhkan cerita ringan, menarik dan mengundang senyum, serta mampu menggelitik pribadi untuk melakukan introspeksi diri.

Sangat direkomendasikan.

Ibuku Malaikatku
Review By Lingmonica10
THROUGH YOU
Review By DeeDee

Incredibly heartwarming story.

I admit I was a little baffled in the beginning. I thought the man's actions were eerie and a little rude, bearning that he emerged out of the blue. The plot of this story is very familiar, yet for some reason I didn't see it coming. The end had really hit hard, which is a feeling I seek when reading stories.

The writing style really swayed me as well, through its use of practical yet astute words, sharp as a knife. The author did a brilliant job conveying emotions through words. In spite of several grammatical errors here and there, the work itself remains undisturbed. They're not too noticable, although it would definitely help to have them altered.

In overall, it's a job well-done. I'm looking forth to reading more from the author!

Will Gates
Review By Made sy

Cerita yang dapat menyegarkan hari Anda..

Siapa yang tidak tahu Will Gates ehh xxx Gates :) hmmm pasti semua tahu walaupun tidak mengenalnya. Sehingga bisa dipastikan ide cerita yang disajikan bukan sesuatu yang baru. Dan disinilah kecakapan penulis ditantang untuk memoles dan membuat plesetan cerita Will Gates sehingga membuat  hari kita lebih segar. Disajikan dengan bahasa ringan  dan lucu khas anak muda, namun tetap mengandung pesan moral yang dalam.

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ratnasatyavati

Luar biasa bahwa ada ruang seperti Tinlit yang berada di lingkup literasi remaja dan menyajikan kisah-kisah penuh motivasi dan hal-hal yang positif untuk diketahui oleh para remaja, dalam hal ini remaja di Indonesia.
Mengingat semakin bergesernya nilai-nilai sosial di mata para remaja, keberadaan TinLit menjadi salah satu gerbang pengetahuan untuk mengenal diri sendiri, lingkungan, cinta, cita dan karya melalui ruang berbagi dan berkreasi ini.

1st Winner of Behind The Quote Short Story Contest 2017
Diahpuspitaas

Saya merasa senang bisa menjadi bagian dari TinLit. Hobi menulis saya bisa tersalurkan, bisa dilihat orang lain juga.
Semoga TinLit semakin sering membuat kontes menulis lagi agar dapat menarik minat orang banyak untuk bergabung serta tertarik pada dunia tulis menulis.

2nd Winner of Behind The Quote Short Story Contest 2017
ditamaswan

Saya merasa termotivasi utk terus menulis dan sangat menyenangkan jika ada orang yang termotivasi dan terinspirasi dgn tulisan kita.

3rd Winner of Behind The Quote Short Story Contest 2017